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Amon
Aug 21, 2008, 01:17 PM


Have a lovley day Princess

DaveDoom51
Aug 21, 2008, 12:08 PM

hehehe I saw this and thot I might pass it along....aint it just the
way it goes sometimes??? heheheh I hope you enjoy it !!!


hearts_geist
Aug 21, 2008, 09:48 AM


darkangel_blackwings
Aug 20, 2008, 08:29 PM


darkangel_blackwings
Aug 19, 2008, 07:46 PM


darkangel_blackwings
Aug 18, 2008, 07:27 PM


Famulus
Aug 18, 2008, 05:03 PM

I FINALLY GOT A GAS GRILL.

darkangel_blackwings
Aug 16, 2008, 08:52 PM



DROPPIN BY TO SAY HI!!!

b_clary
Aug 16, 2008, 01:44 PM

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Hey friend, how are you?

DaveDoom51
Aug 16, 2008, 05:04 AM

Well here is the latest. It is a bit of a departure for me...
playing with the metre, but I hope you enjoy it.
I would enjoy hearing your reaction to this one....Thanks !





Dreams From The Lake

Depth-less waters of the lake surrender...
Gifts to enhance the female gender.
Here crystal dreams and passion's pleasure...
Reward the worthy...with aether's treasure.

Vivid dreams and passion's scenes...
Reflected in the waters....
Such power seeks sweet harmony...
Gifts for her blessed daughters.

Goddess rules here, undisputed...
Her perfect heart is so well suited...
To guide young souls, not yet polluted...
Ensuring they are not deluded.

Innocent bathing, unashamed...
But, evil greedy eyes observe.
A moments fantasy to be claimed...
Eyes drinking in her every curve.

From his concealment in the trees...
This interloper barely breathes...
He watches as she strides ashore...
Infernal thoughts demanding more.

As goddess steps upon the sand...
Her silken skin so soft and tanned...
Her watcher doesn't understand...
The retribution she has planned.

A secret smile plays 'pon her face...
As she stretches in the sun.
When will such spoilers learn their place...
This one's lesson just begun.

Trespasser's mind at last made up...
This stunning beauty he will take.
Another soul to fill his cup...
Revenge upon this hateful lake.

Magically he is astride her...
But before he thrusts inside her...
He somehow finds he's bound beside her...
Aware now...that he's been denied her.

Above him stands a snarling creature...
An apparition from nightmare dreams.
Soft tranquil silence of the lake...
Bears witness to his desperate screams.

Outraged daughter of the lake...
Watches coldly as he squirms...
Pondering what else she should take...
Before she leaves him for the worms.

She reaches out with cruel intent...
Removing that, which now seems spent...
That part he used without consent...
Her climax reached, watching his torment.

Sacred peace is at last restored...
His awful death...is his just reward!


© August, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved



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darkangel_blackwings
Aug 15, 2008, 08:18 PM



I HOPE YOUR WEEK WAS AN AWESOME ONE!!!!

Famulus
Aug 14, 2008, 05:40 PM

I OWN ALL OF SKINNY PUPPY CD'S AND ALL DVD VIDEOS OF THEM GOOD CHOICE.

Famulus
Aug 14, 2008, 02:23 PM

PINK FLOYD. WELL I USED TO HAVE ALL OF THEIR ALBUMS YES ALBUMS BUT I DON'T CARE FOR THEIR MUSIC I MEAN I DON'T SEEK IT OUT. BUT THANKS FOR THINKING OF ME. BE WELL

DaveDoom51
Aug 14, 2008, 01:40 AM

Well....I just can't seem to finish my latest.......and, since it has been so long
since I have stopped by.....Here is something by Leslie Cottle, that I really en-
joy, and I hope you do as well


Famulus
Aug 13, 2008, 03:18 PM

HEY FRIEND









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