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Geoff45
Jun 5, 2007, 11:49 PM


Geoff45
Jun 5, 2007, 11:48 PM

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DaveDoom51
Jun 5, 2007, 03:12 PM

I don't think you have seen this one, Yet-----Opinion???



Hunger

Desire surges, inflamed blood boiling---Adramelech's awful serpent uncoiling...
Throw off the shroud, escape confinement---desire rejects reason's cruel refinement...
Images perceived, foul actions concieved---pressure building, satisfy this unholy need...
From ancient legend, unappended---dreadful repetition, another life ended.

Unwary citizens intent, embroiled---in life's pursuit, mortality destined to be soiled....
A chance encounter, vicious carnage enacted---mortal death the price exacted....
Satisfaction achieved, pathetic husk discarded---breif death memories uselessly imparted...
To one to whom such pitiful sharing---tis but a footnote, incapable of caring.

Dark ancient predator,freely ranging---at large among us, filthy desire never changing...
Hunger rampant, fell nature shamelessly displayed---man's sacrifice leaves lesser gods dismayed...
Myth and darkness veil his movement---religion and doctrine boast meager improvement...
Assyrian lunacy, imprudent preistly creation---assuming form in latter days, embraced by every nation.

Succor forever denied...
Only disdain for those who died!




©2007 ~davedoom51




Geoff45
Jun 4, 2007, 10:13 PM



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DaveDoom51
Jun 3, 2007, 07:15 PM

Here is an old one slightly reworked and renamed. Quite a departure for me lol---try it and let me know????


Dragonbayne

Birthed.. 'tween twilight and dawn -----two hearts delicately woven...
A bit of flesh------an ancient soul, goodness surrepticiously chosen.
Proud heart circulating the whisper of nephillum---dim legends recalled...
From times long past, when the world was young, and mortal men pathetically small.
Into our time, arrival hardly noted....vengeful destiny already spoken.

Wrongs to right, powerful images on display-----angry eyes aware...
Innocence soothed---scrambling evil---unable to hide anywhere.
Fragile souls she leaves untouched----evil one's, sentence carved in flesh...
Just and true---revenge at last exacted---the world again refreshed
Ruffian's heart gentled---duty done---won't anyone care?

Alive and vital, she quests
Painful living, refusing rest


©2006-2007 ~davedoom51


azazel
Jun 2, 2007, 11:53 PM

well yeah my real name is rudy u can call me daimon

Wonderfully_Evil
Jun 2, 2007, 07:59 PM

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azazel
Jun 2, 2007, 02:01 AM

hey well yeah lets play so yeah whats ur name

JohnnyD
Jun 1, 2007, 10:31 PM

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Tekka
Jun 1, 2007, 09:50 PM

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DaveDoom51
Jun 1, 2007, 01:04 AM

Look what my friend scarfac3boricua made me!!! So here is an evening wish to you!!!



Geoff45
May 31, 2007, 09:55 PM



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