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DokkVitki
Mar 20, 2008, 10:12 AM


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Mar 19, 2008, 04:45 PM

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Mar 18, 2008, 10:28 AM

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Mar 17, 2008, 07:42 PM

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Mar 17, 2008, 11:41 AM

Happy St. Patrick's Day!


DaveDoom51
Mar 16, 2008, 07:26 AM

Well, I finished the prequel to "Devil's Plaything".....remember that one??? Well here it is, "Cheyenne", I hope ya enjoy it!!

Oh and by the way, if my posting my work on yer comments is not agreeable with you, please let me know, and I wull no longer do so !!! (I am such a poetry slut...*sigh*)



Cheyenne


Abbey’s walls still surround her, hateful bells announce her plight---breathless dreams of elusive freedom, her quest for reunion begins tonight.
Biding time ‘til she was older, vague memories haunt her sleeping---no more patience for separation, no more secret midnight weeping.
Sacred glow…impending woman-hood, marks her lovely child-like face---something else there… not quite so pretty, the risk that it will take its place.
Fiery eyes keen and probing, looking out ‘neath innocent’s brow---making even brave men cower, destiny’s promise now allowed.

Mother’s voice is silently calling, as she casually leaves this place---so easy her escape accomplished, reveling in freedom’s sweet embrace.
Moon-glow offers welcome succor, as she finds herself alone---past forbidding darkened doorways, recalling memories of cheap cologne
Wondering at this in-born majik, that which certainly guides her way---priceless gift so desperately given, when her mother gave her away?
“Cheyenne”, her mother softly whispered, on that night so long ago---“remember always gentle daughter, my love is with you…though I must go.”

Music draws her to a window, magic portal through which she peers---graceful profile of her mother, easily distinguished through her tears.
As she watches through the window, her mother’s gaze attracted---to the sight of two men struggling, terrible violence therein enacted.
Such shock revealed in mother’s face, all animation drained---Cheyenne feels her awful sorrow, escaping through the window pane.
Suddenly, the violent stranger, calls out her mother’s name---“Candida I shall have you always, for my rival now is slain!”

Cheyenne watches as Candida, accepts what she has seen---horror reflected in her eyes, her mother begins to scream.
Groaning as she turns away, Cheyenne can bear no more---frantic in her movements now, she searches for the door.
As she races ‘round the corner, she spies the entry way---rushing forward in her panic, her footsteps echo her dismay.
Tragic figure exiting, as she finally gains the door---red light brightly shining there, confirms Candida is a whore.

A thousand answers flooding through her, without a single question posed….
She takes her mother’s hand in her’s, this chapter in their lives is closed.


© March, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved


DokkVitki
Mar 15, 2008, 12:47 PM

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DaveDoom51
Mar 15, 2008, 09:07 AM

Great hearing from you, Angel.....have a dark and dangerous weekend!!

Jack_TheRipper
Mar 15, 2008, 06:00 AM

What you think of my new poem?

She knows no other Ecstasy

Joyous suffering painted upon pealing walls,
I breath her torment.

Shackled to my canvas,
torn fingernails scream eternally.

She sings my soul, with every glance.
Eyes lusting from within.

Her pulsing flesh beckons me.

As the knife solidifies her desires,
Severed fingertips caress my soul.

Each tear begging for more.

She knows no other ecstasy.

tattgal1971
Mar 14, 2008, 05:16 PM

hi thanks for the request xx
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evildead
Mar 13, 2008, 07:05 PM

thanks for the add how are you?

Jack_TheRipper
Mar 13, 2008, 05:34 PM

No problem! I always like meeting new people!

robzombiedracula666
Mar 13, 2008, 02:51 PM

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robzombiedracula666
Mar 13, 2008, 09:42 AM

thanks for the add and welcome to deeprealm if you need anything involving codes or layouts, just let me know

DaveDoom51
Mar 12, 2008, 06:24 PM

Here is one I just finished today….Hope you enjoy !!!

Sacrifice

She feels so out of place here, eyes wide with disbelief---the death of tortured innocence, she hopes will bring relief.
Capering forms around the blaze, seem slightly altered now---viscous quality to the air, passions' madness sought somehow.
Were those really antlers, she discerned upon the head---of the friend who had invited her, to this celebration of the dead?
Or just a trick of firelight, she refuses to believe---shifting images all around her, alterations impossible to conceive.

A wildness creeps inside of her, blood screaming through her veins---warm desire begs fulfillment, sweet release...what she will gain.
Delighted keening fills her ears, hooded figure upon the dais---those around her yammering, as they chant their ancient praise.
The others seem to know their roles, what is her purpose here---a sheen of sour perspiration, lubricates her dawning fear.
Her gaze drawn to the figure, standing on the stage---she notices just how large he is, she discerns his awful rage.

As if her legs possess, no volition of their own---she finds herself approaching him, her features cast in stone.
Hands reach out to touch her, as she journeys to her doom---perceiving her role with clarity now, demi-god to be her groom.
Unconsciously her hands attempt, to smooth her raiment down---for after all the clothes she wears, will be her wedding gown.
At last she ceases walking, arriving by his side---a brief triumphant smile, reveals the courage she found inside.

Startled gasp escapes her lips, as she looks into his eyes---depth of his evil revealed to her, somehow she's not surprised...
To feel her precious organs, spilling out upon the floor---the questions she wished answers to, are not important anymore.


© March, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved



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