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DaveDoom51
Mar 16, 2008, 06:24 AM

Well, I finished the prequel to "Devil's Plaything".....remember that one??? Well here it is, "Cheyenne", I hope ya enjoy it!!

Oh and by the way, if my posting my work on yer comments is not agreeable with you, please let me know, and I wull no longer do so !!! (I am such a poetry slut...*sigh*)



Cheyenne


Abbey’s walls still surround her, hateful bells announce her plight---breathless dreams of elusive freedom, her quest for reunion begins tonight.
Biding time ‘til she was older, vague memories haunt her sleeping---no more patience for separation, no more secret midnight weeping.
Sacred glow…impending woman-hood, marks her lovely child-like face---something else there… not quite so pretty, the risk that it will take its place.
Fiery eyes keen and probing, looking out ‘neath innocent’s brow---making even brave men cower, destiny’s promise now allowed.

Mother’s voice is silently calling, as she casually leaves this place---so easy her escape accomplished, reveling in freedom’s sweet embrace.
Moon-glow offers welcome succor, as she finds herself alone---past forbidding darkened doorways, recalling memories of cheap cologne
Wondering at this in-born majik, that which certainly guides her way---priceless gift so desperately given, when her mother gave her away?
“Cheyenne”, her mother softly whispered, on that night so long ago---“remember always gentle daughter, my love is with you…though I must go.”

Music draws her to a window, magic portal through which she peers---graceful profile of her mother, easily distinguished through her tears.
As she watches through the window, her mother’s gaze attracted---to the sight of two men struggling, terrible violence therein enacted.
Such shock revealed in mother’s face, all animation drained---Cheyenne feels her awful sorrow, escaping through the window pane.
Suddenly, the violent stranger, calls out her mother’s name---“Candida I shall have you always, for my rival now is slain!”

Cheyenne watches as Candida, accepts what she has seen---horror reflected in her eyes, her mother begins to scream.
Groaning as she turns away, Cheyenne can bear no more---frantic in her movements now, she searches for the door.
As she races ‘round the corner, she spies the entry way---rushing forward in her panic, her footsteps echo her dismay.
Tragic figure exiting, as she finally gains the door---red light brightly shining there, confirms Candida is a whore.

A thousand answers flooding through her, without a single question posed….
She takes her mother’s hand in her’s, this chapter in their lives is closed.


© March, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved


fatalquiescence
Mar 16, 2008, 05:46 AM

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DaveDoom51
Mar 15, 2008, 09:20 AM

Hey, Gypsy ....it was great hearing from you!! Have a delectable weekend, my friend!!

fatalquiescence
Mar 13, 2008, 05:49 AM


DaveDoom51
Mar 12, 2008, 05:28 PM

Well here is one I just finished……I hope you enjoy I look forward to hearing from you !

Sacrifice

She feels so out of place here, eyes wide with disbelief---the death of tortured innocence, she hopes will bring relief.
Capering forms around the blaze, seem slightly altered now---viscous quality to the air, passions' madness sought somehow.
Were those really antlers, she discerned upon the head---of the friend who had invited her, to this celebration of the dead?
Or just a trick of firelight, she refuses to believe---shifting images all around her, alterations impossible to conceive.

A wildness creeps inside of her, blood screaming through her veins---warm desire begs fulfillment, sweet release...what she will gain.
Delighted keening fills her ears, hooded figure upon the dais---those around her yammering, as they chant their ancient praise.
The others seem to know their roles, what is her purpose here---a sheen of sour perspiration, lubricates her dawning fear.
Her gaze drawn to the figure, standing on the stage---she notices just how large he is, she discerns his awful rage.

As if her legs possess, no volition of their own---she finds herself approaching him, her features cast in stone.
Hands reach out to touch her, as she journeys to her doom---perceiving her role with clarity now, demi-god to be her groom.
Unconsciously her hands attempt, to smooth her raiment down---for after all the clothes she wears, will be her wedding gown.
At last she ceases walking, arriving by his side---a brief triumphant smile, reveals the courage she found inside.

Startled gasp escapes her lips, as she looks into his eyes---depth of his evil revealed to her, somehow she's not surprised...
To feel her precious organs, spilling out upon the floor---the questions she wished answers to, are not important anymore.


© March, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved



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Chapel
Mar 12, 2008, 07:40 AM

The electric hellfire club fucking kicks ass brother.
How's your day going?

embracethymisery
Mar 11, 2008, 08:50 PM

Hey Gypsy! Cheers for the add. And beautiful artwork, by the way.

Belial
Mar 11, 2008, 04:54 PM

Have a good one bro! Hope to talk to you sometime soon

Belial
Mar 11, 2008, 04:24 PM

GYPERS!

BlackMagic
Mar 8, 2008, 02:33 PM

Hola, Gypsy. Just dropping by to wish you a kickass weekend.

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DaveDoom51
Mar 8, 2008, 05:27 AM

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Kimmy
Mar 7, 2008, 03:19 AM

Hola Gypsy,

Just stopping by to wish you a wonderful weekend my amigo.

Kim xx

BlackMagic
Mar 6, 2008, 04:46 PM

{{{{{{{{{Gypsy}}}}}}}} It's wonderful to see you online. How are you? You've been missed at SS, but of course we all know you can't get on from work. I hope you're doing well my friend.

Dark-Phoenix
Mar 6, 2008, 02:26 AM

hi Gypsy how you doing? ...thanks for the picture.

Dark-Phoenix
Mar 4, 2008, 11:10 PM










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