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DaveDoom51
Jun 23, 2007, 06:46 AM

A word of warning to men everywhere who would presume to trifle with the Ladies.




Annabelle


She strolls along, her stealth uncanny...eyes expressing her disbelief .
Deaths sweet release, the prize she seeks ....her ultimate relief.
Foul odor accompanies sweet anabelle..sensed, not quite discerned.
Steady on, her mission paramount....attracting notice, unconcerned.

Life's lustre lost this fateful day...betrayors' paid the price...
Damage done her soul this day...just payment exacted, thrice.
Wretched pair offended her...continued existance, foul insult...
Indescretion not allowed, swift awful vengence...inevitable result.

The hearts she carries in her hands, seem yet to flutter, still...
Is better to have loved and lost, what silly nonsense...utter swill.
Anticipation, heartbeat rapid...cruel vengence still incomplete...
Tonight's cold moon holds promise...carnal yearning will retreat.

Honeysuckle upon the breeze...mother moon ascends the sky...
Course of action plain enough, Annabelle begins to cry.
Inserting steel through protesting flesh...involuntary groan....
Three hearts lay upon the stone...the beating one, her own.




©June, 2007 ~davedoom51

I wonder if you would be kind enough to give an opinion???

DemandFortune
Jun 23, 2007, 02:27 AM

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DaveDoom51
Jun 22, 2007, 03:51 PM

Dragon God


Saturn, visible in midnight skyes... ascends as plaintive mortal cries....
Beseech uncaring ears in vain....this fell cycle must not come again.

Dark vehicle for madness struts....ancient legend, once quiet, stirring in jagged ritual cuts...
In days long past, beyond mortal understanding...Zagan presided, jealous right hand of evil demanding...
Obescience of writhing, unwashed masses...disdaining the rule, driving infernal unholy clashes...
Escalating dementia, speaks in tongues too familiar...lustful designs appear logical, will heaven's innocence surrender?

Corruptors of innocence, betrayers of trust...gaining acendency by default, birthing Zagar's insatiable lust.
Come to him now, you too willing slaves of desire....corruption of beauty, is the price that's required.
Lasting peace an illusion, fanciful daydreams entrust....fragile innocence the admission...left lifeless as dust.
Zagar's rebirth foretold, awful knowlege scarce hidden...wretched man-souls, once priceless, fit only for midden.

The twentieth upon you, arriving in fire....trumpets death to the beauty mortal souls doth require...
Hark you legions, bleating, insupportable excuses...stinking of midden, honor lost among, unspeakable abuses.
The beast, at last, comes round for the feast...promised by prophets, humanity's horror unleashed....
Zagar.....gatekeeper, Leiutenant of Hell....free amongst us again, lies...all he can tell.

Transmuting heartsblood to bitter wine...
Worship mammon, let Zagar's ascendancy shine




©2006-2007 ~davedoom51

DaveDoom51
Jun 22, 2007, 03:49 PM

*Bows* "Adam's Despair" absolutely ROX MY SOX.....excellent visuals and metre *Bows again!

Here is a couple more as per yer request!

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Intravenous

She rests as ages pass---her dreams appreciated by her at last.
Sweet images, sweeter experience recalled---raging and writhing, jealous gods appalled.
Lust wends its way throughout her dreams---temptation offered, stinking daemon schemes.
Pure sleeping soul, sorely tested---for now...resisting...evil's foul desire bested.

Sleep deep, oh pristine innocence---drink deep from oblivion's proffered affluence.
Birthed long ago in eden's darker regions---grim enemy seeks entry for his fell legions.
Promised gateway to mortal delight---bitter struggle disturbs your rest tonight.
Be strong,sweet fragile existence---humanity's fate depends 'pon your resistance.

Restless now, darker images perceived---some of Dhampir's lies believed.
Joyous blood dreams, infernal celebration---hot fluid, orgiastic gluttony blasphemes creation.
Gentle ingenue at last perverted---forbidden rites brutally asserted.
Dark intent invades, irresistable corruption results---Lifeforce continuity lost, suffering hells cruel insults.

Valiant struggle, purity forever ended---entry gained, mortal life surrendered.
Dhampir's fearsome legions thrusting---through bruised flesh gateway, trusting...
Ancient prophesies' predilection---humanity's death...intravenous infection.
Woeful screams, writhing bodies sweating---humanity enslaved...lifeblood jetting.

Unholy appetite appeased---
Humanity hoplessly diseased


©2007 ~davedoom51

DaveDoom51
Jun 22, 2007, 09:47 AM





Abaddon
Jun 22, 2007, 07:48 AM


Hi again

Abaddon
Jun 22, 2007, 03:45 AM

Thank you for the add and the kind words. Welcome to DeepRealm.

DaveDoom51
Jun 22, 2007, 03:15 AM

Thanks for the add!!!!

I don't think you have seen this one, Yet-----Opinion???



Hunger

Desire surges, inflamed blood boiling---Adramelech's awful serpent uncoiling...
Throw off the shroud, escape confinement---desire rejects reason's cruel refinement...
Images perceived, foul actions concieved---pressure building, satisfy this unholy need...
From ancient legend, unappended---dreadful repetition, another life ended.

Unwary citizens intent, embroiled---in life's pursuit, mortality destined to be soiled....
A chance encounter, vicious carnage enacted---mortal death the price exacted....
Satisfaction achieved, pathetic husk discarded---breif death memories uselessly imparted...
To one to whom such pitiful sharing---tis but a footnote, incapable of caring.

Dark ancient predator,freely ranging---at large among us, filthy desire never changing...
Hunger rampant, fell nature shamelessly displayed---man's sacrifice leaves lesser gods dismayed...
Myth and darkness veil his movement---religion and doctrine boast meager improvement...
Assyrian lunacy, imprudent preistly creation---assuming form in latter days, embraced by every nation.

Succor forever denied...
Only disdain for those who died!




©2007 ~davedoom51










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