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Dragonbayne
May 25, 2007, 09:14 AM

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DaveDoom51
May 21, 2007, 05:42 PM

If you would prefer not to receive
any more poems, please message me!
Here is one a little different.....more subtle! Try it???

Krystal Kaverns

Buried in antiquity, swaddled deep in earths embrace...
Few have been there---beauty and fell sacrifice demanded in this place.
Dwelling near to mother's heart, these awesome halls resound...
Disguised in desperate silence, infernal torture---dark memories still abound.

Awful beauty exacts her tribute, countless souls consumed...
Seeking out her beauty, infrequent travelers, unwitting guests---eternally entombed
Behold her splendor at your peril---grave ransom to be paid...
Hasty judgements, human failings--- desperate apetite displayed.

Be wary intrepid adventurer, monstrous demi-gods still dwell...
Deep in the earth by mother's heart---krystal kaverns are unwell.
Perverted beauty gnashing teeth, twisted intelligence exists there...
The Krystal halls of ages past, yearn for mortal soul's sweet nectar.




©2006-2007 ~davedoom51


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Geoff45
May 20, 2007, 04:35 PM

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HAVE A GREAT WEEK!

DaveDoom51
May 19, 2007, 08:26 AM

For Those of you who have asked about more
(And since I am a Shameless Slut, promoting my work)
Here is something you might enjoy!


Hunger



Desire surges, inflamed blood boiling---Adramelech's awful serpent uncoiling...
Throw off the shroud, escape confinement---desire rejects reason's cruel refinement...
Images perceived, foul actions concieved---pressure building, satisfy this unholy need...
From ancient legend, unappended---dreadful repetition, another life ended.

Unwary citizens intent, embroiled---in life's pursuit, mortality destined to be soiled....
A chance encounter, vicious carnage enacted---mortal death the price exacted....
Satisfaction achieved, pathetic husk discarded---breif death memories uselessly imparted...
To one to whom such pitiful sharing---tis but a footnote, incapable of caring.

Dark ancient predator,freely ranging---at large among us, filthy desire never changing...
Hunger rampant, fell nature shamelessly displayed---man's sacrifice leaves lesser gods dismayed...
Myth and darkness veil his movement---religion and doctrine boast meager improvement...
Assyrian lunacy, imprudent preistly creation---assuming form in latter days, embraced by every nation.

Succor forever denied...
Only disdain for those who died!








©2007 ~davedoom51

JohnnyD
May 19, 2007, 12:28 AM

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DarkWisper44
May 18, 2007, 11:04 PM

The Shadows are here
The gloom is comforting
The dimness comes
Darkness is here
The dark is peaceful
I like when darkness is here
I am happy in the dark
The dark is here
I can see clearer than in the light


Geoff45
May 17, 2007, 06:13 AM

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viper666
May 16, 2007, 12:49 PM

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Geoff45
May 15, 2007, 10:24 PM

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JUST STOPPING BY TO SAY HI!

viper666
May 15, 2007, 07:48 PM

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DaveDoom51
May 15, 2007, 05:46 PM

Here is one I really like---How about you?


Apocolypse

thunder echoes,storm clouds gather...
lightning rapes protesting sky....
heaven weeps for lost chances, new beginnings, hopes unrealized
while in the abyss new order writhes...

change is in the air, sensed not seen....
promises made, promises kept, freedom is the imagery
yearning to strut...
timeless chains are now struck, chaos in the making
souls of man ripe for the taking....

free at last from heavens cruel embrace
chaos walks amongst us, mad dogs proclaim her return....
eyes hungry; claws unsheathed
birthed again from unclean earth...
she comes; all hail the Daemon Bytch...

out of the pit, birthblood steaming...
stinking of sweat, changling tissue straining, destiny at hand,
sweet discord...
shreiking earth rejects her, recoiling from foretellings voice
mad dogs echo Daemons choice...

embracing mankind, disquises fading, death of hope commanded...
revealed at last in all her splendour lifeblood her macabre desire
innocence remanded...
New order lusting for fulfillment, appetite not appeased
dried husks of souls discarded, breeding Daemons fell disease...

Awake again, fortellings voice...
true darkness reigns, the death of choice


©2006-2007 ~davedoom51

DaveDoom51
May 15, 2007, 02:18 PM

I feel like this week
is gonna be a long one!!

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DaveDoom51
May 14, 2007, 09:47 AM

I am sending this poem to all my friends......shamelessly asking for opinions! You up to critique my poem???----good or bad, I would like your opinion!!??!

Eden (Revisited)


Dappled moonlight frolicks upon Eden's garden wall---ashamed...
Awaken fragile innocence, hear the clarion call---brass lungs bleating Lillith's vile refrain;
Amidst the brightness, darkness reigns, acendancy gained...
Experimenting, challenging, all is well---tis but a gods-game---balance disdained.

Hot breathed desire, angelic madness refusing to be undone...
Proclaims the truth of centuries---endlessly repeated---chanting deprivations yet to come;
Evil speaks between the lines, striving for awakening, lust ravening, gods' will to be won.
Death of truth, vile fluids leaking, desolation's arid flesh renewed,
The imp of chaos dances, order and purpose are eschewed.

Fearful engine of destruction, damned imp furiously feeding coal...
Pressure building, boilers threatening to blow---destruction the ultimate goal.
Pistons pumping, horrified engineers enthralled, the promised fasttrack laid---
Now patiently waiting, charnel caverns swallow all, ancient debts at last are paid.

Bleating souls on board, white eyes staring, vulnerable flesh ripe for tearing.
Reptilian shadows exulting, lilliths awful child resulting---birth of sorrow...
Separate destiny fused together, 'tis prophecy's price---death of tomorrow.
Destination ahead, reluctant passengers arriving---mortal coils refuse death's sweet release...
Unrelieved--- hungry now for Eden's promise---will the hunger never cease


Dessicated souls lament mortal deception...
Eternity looms, supperating sores beyond conception.



©2007 ~davedoom51

Dragonbayne
May 14, 2007, 01:02 AM

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May 13, 2007, 02:04 AM

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