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DaveDoom51
Jun 23, 2007, 06:58 AM

A word of warning to men everywhere who would presume to trifle with the Ladies.




Annabelle


She strolls along, her stealth uncanny...eyes expressing her disbelief .
Deaths sweet release, the prize she seeks ....her ultimate relief.
Foul odor accompanies sweet anabelle..sensed, not quite discerned.
Steady on, her mission paramount....attracting notice, unconcerned.

Life's lustre lost this fateful day...betrayors' paid the price...
Damage done her soul this day...just payment exacted, thrice.
Wretched pair offended her...continued existance, foul insult...
Indescretion not allowed, swift awful vengence...inevitable result.

The hearts she carries in her hands, seem yet to flutter, still...
Is better to have loved and lost, what silly nonsense...utter swill.
Anticipation, heartbeat rapid...cruel vengence still incomplete...
Tonight's cold moon holds promise...carnal yearning will retreat.

Honeysuckle upon the breeze...mother moon ascends the sky...
Course of action plain enough, Annabelle begins to cry.
Inserting steel through protesting flesh...involuntary groan....
Three hearts lay upon the stone...the beating one, her own.




©June, 2007 ~davedoom51

I wonder if you would be kind enough to give an opinion???

cesareo
Jun 23, 2007, 02:10 AM

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Abaddon
Jun 22, 2007, 09:47 AM



Hi

DaveDoom51
Jun 22, 2007, 09:40 AM





DaveDoom51
Jun 22, 2007, 07:33 AM

Here is what you asked for, Lady.

A Moment.


Sweet sheen of perspiration gleaming, heart pounding...blood steaming...
Wanton bodies scheming...delayed release...walls resound wanton screaming.
Primal undulations weaving...delightful sensations cleaving.....sanity slowly leaving.
Rapid breathing betrays the truth...Lovely goddess now believing.

Gently, stroking lightly, parting thighs.....pouting lips decry----
The coming pain of entry... soul scream...echoing love's own sweet sigh.
Building....urgently awaiting release...this flood tide thrusts...
Against yeilding sinew...his lovely smile renews her trust.

Sated, bodies glowing as the sun.....
Two trembling bodies now made one.



©June, 2007 ~davedoom51

robzombiedracula666
Jun 21, 2007, 10:44 AM

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Abaddon
Jun 21, 2007, 10:31 AM

thank you for adding me.

athan_666
Jun 21, 2007, 07:24 AM

rrrrrrrrrr thanx for the fucking add


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DaveDoom51
Jun 20, 2007, 12:24 PM

Thanks for the add Here is a poem you might like?? Let me know, please. If you enjoy, several on my profile and wull send you dome frome time to time lol.




Intravenous

She rests as ages pass---her dreams appreciated by her at last.
Sweet images, sweeter experience recalled---raging and writhing, jealous gods appalled.
Lust wends its way throughout her dreams---temptation offered, stinking daemon schemes.
Pure sleeping soul, sorely tested---for now...resisting...evil's foul desire bested.

Sleep deep, oh pristine innocence---drink deep from oblivion's proffered affluence.
Birthed long ago in eden's darker regions---grim enemy seeks entry for his fell legions.
Promised gateway to mortal delight---bitter struggle disturbs your rest tonight.
Be strong,sweet fragile existence---humanity's fate depends 'pon your resistance.

Restless now, darker images perceived---some of Dhampir's lies believed.
Joyous blood dreams, infernal celebration---hot fluid, orgiastic gluttony blasphemes creation.
Gentle ingenue at last perverted---forbidden rites brutally asserted.
Dark intent invades, irresistable corruption results---Lifeforce continuity lost, suffering hells cruel insults.

Valiant struggle, purity forever ended---entry gained, mortal life surrendered.
Dhampir's fearsome legions thrusting---through bruised flesh gateway, trusting...
Ancient prophesies' predilection---humanity's death...intravenous infection.
Woeful screams, writhing bodies sweating---humanity enslaved...lifeblood jetting.

Unholy appetite appeased---
Humanity hoplessly diseased


©2007 ~davedoom51










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