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priest
Jun 10, 2007, 05:05 PM

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Jun 10, 2007, 05:05 PM

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Jun 8, 2007, 11:25 AM

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Jun 7, 2007, 11:53 AM

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Jun 7, 2007, 10:34 AM

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DaveDoom51
Jun 3, 2007, 06:39 PM

Here is an old one slightly reworked and renamed. Quite a departure for me lol---try it and let me know????


Dragonbayne

Birthed.. 'tween twilight and dawn -----two hearts delicately woven...
A bit of flesh------an ancient soul, goodness surrepticiously chosen.
Proud heart circulating the whisper of nephillum---dim legends recalled...
From times long past, when the world was young, and mortal men pathetically small.
Into our time, arrival hardly noted....vengeful destiny already spoken.

Wrongs to right, powerful images on display-----angry eyes aware...
Innocence soothed---scrambling evil---unable to hide anywhere.
Fragile souls she leaves untouched----evil one's, sentence carved in flesh...
Just and true---revenge at last exacted---the world again refreshed
Ruffian's heart gentled---duty done---won't anyone care?

Alive and vital, she quests
Painful living, refusing rest


©2006-2007 ~davedoom51


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Jun 2, 2007, 01:02 PM



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Jun 1, 2007, 12:14 AM

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DaveDoom51
May 30, 2007, 02:31 AM

I like the new look!!!!

DaveDoom51
May 26, 2007, 11:08 AM

A bit of Ryme to pass the tyme??

Dragon God


Saturn, visible in midnight skyes... ascends as plaintive mortal cries....
Beseech uncaring ears in vain....this fell cycle must not come again.

Dark vehicle for madness struts....ancient legend, once quiet, stirring in jagged ritual cuts...
In days long past, beyond mortal understanding...Zagan presided, jealous right hand of evil demanding...
Obescience of writhing, unwashed masses...disdaining the rule, driving infernal unholy clashes...
Escalating dementia, speaks in tongues too familiar...lustful designs appear logical, will heaven's innocence surrender?

Corruptors of innocence, betrayers of trust...gaining acendency by default, birthing Zagar's insatiable lust.
Come to him now, you too willing slaves of desire....corruption of beauty, is the price that's required.
Lasting peace an illusion, fanciful daydreams entrust....fragile innocence the admission...left lifeless as dust.
Zagar's rebirth foretold, awful knowlege scarce hidden...wretched man-souls, once priceless, fit only for midden.

The twentieth upon you, arriving in fire....trumpets death to the beauty mortal souls doth require...
Hark you legions, bleating, insupportable excuses...stinking of midden, honor lost among, unspeakable abuses.
The beast, at last, comes round for the feast...promised by prophets, humanity's horror unleashed....
Zagar.....gatekeeper, Leiutenant of Hell....free amongst us again, lies...all he can tell.

Transmuting heartsblood to bitter wine...
Worship mammon, let Zagar's ascendancy shine




©2006-2007 ~davedoom51

DaveDoom51
May 21, 2007, 05:48 PM

If you would prefer not to receive
any more poems, please message me!
Here is one a little different.....more subtle! Try it???

Krystal Kaverns

Buried in antiquity, swaddled deep in earths embrace...
Few have been there---beauty and fell sacrifice demanded in this place.
Dwelling near to mother's heart, these awesome halls resound...
Disguised in desperate silence, infernal torture---dark memories still abound.

Awful beauty exacts her tribute, countless souls consumed...
Seeking out her beauty, infrequent travelers, unwitting guests---eternally entombed
Behold her splendor at your peril---grave ransom to be paid...
Hasty judgements, human failings--- desperate apetite displayed.

Be wary intrepid adventurer, monstrous demi-gods still dwell...
Deep in the earth by mother's heart---krystal kaverns are unwell.
Perverted beauty gnashing teeth, twisted intelligence exists there...
The Krystal halls of ages past, yearn for mortal soul's sweet nectar.




©2006-2007 ~davedoom51


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DaveDoom51
May 19, 2007, 08:33 AM

For Those of you who have asked about more
(And since I am a Shameless Slut, promoting my work)
Here is something you might enjoy!


Hunger



Desire surges, inflamed blood boiling---Adramelech's awful serpent uncoiling...
Throw off the shroud, escape confinement---desire rejects reason's cruel refinement...
Images perceived, foul actions concieved---pressure building, satisfy this unholy need...
From ancient legend, unappended---dreadful repetition, another life ended.

Unwary citizens intent, embroiled---in life's pursuit, mortality destined to be soiled....
A chance encounter, vicious carnage enacted---mortal death the price exacted....
Satisfaction achieved, pathetic husk discarded---breif death memories uselessly imparted...
To one to whom such pitiful sharing---tis but a footnote, incapable of caring.

Dark ancient predator,freely ranging---at large among us, filthy desire never changing...
Hunger rampant, fell nature shamelessly displayed---man's sacrifice leaves lesser gods dismayed...
Myth and darkness veil his movement---religion and doctrine boast meager improvement...
Assyrian lunacy, imprudent preistly creation---assuming form in latter days, embraced by every nation.

Succor forever denied...
Only disdain for those who died!








©2007 ~davedoom51

DaveDoom51
May 15, 2007, 05:52 PM

Here is one I really like---How about you?


Apocolypse

thunder echoes,storm clouds gather...
lightning rapes protesting sky....
heaven weeps for lost chances, new beginnings, hopes unrealized
while in the abyss new order writhes...

change is in the air, sensed not seen....
promises made, promises kept, freedom is the imagery
yearning to strut...
timeless chains are now struck, chaos in the making
souls of man ripe for the taking....

free at last from heavens cruel embrace
chaos walks amongst us, mad dogs proclaim her return....
eyes hungry; claws unsheathed
birthed again from unclean earth...
she comes; all hail the Daemon Bytch...

out of the pit, birthblood steaming...
stinking of sweat, changling tissue straining, destiny at hand,
sweet discord...
shreiking earth rejects her, recoiling from foretellings voice
mad dogs echo Daemons choice...

embracing mankind, disquises fading, death of hope commanded...
revealed at last in all her splendour lifeblood her macabre desire
innocence remanded...
New order lusting for fulfillment, appetite not appeased
dried husks of souls discarded, breeding Daemons fell disease...

Awake again, fortellings voice...
true darkness reigns, the death of choice


©2006-2007 ~davedoom51









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