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DaveDoom51
Jul 25, 2008, 03:14 PM

You are very kind, Heart!!! Thank You ! I love it when you stop by my page....is a vurry good feeling *hugs*

DaveDoom51
Jul 25, 2008, 03:13 AM



Tah-Shee-Nah


Standing alone, no one around...
Place out of time with what surrounds
it...
Sitting upon sweet hallowed ground...
She wonders why no one has found
it.

How long ago, how many ages...
Who's in charge, who turns the pages?
What rules apply when majik dictates...
Those who enter, and those left to wait?

She passes through some kind of membrane...
Some ancient spell left to dismay...
Those who hate; cruel heartless wretches...
Those who reek of man's decay.

Tashina finds herself engrossed...
Past images and other ghosts...
Leave her as she switches planes...
Embracing majik once again.

She bathes away her worldly cares...
In crystal waters from the lake...
Sighing as her soul relaxes...
Careful to give more than she takes.

Sleeping in the sun's embrace...
A smile appears upon her face...
A fleeting tear shed for the past...
She knows that tear will be her last.

A velvet touch disturbs her rest...
Familiar scent invades her mind...
Soft images of crimson nights...
Moonlight and her heart entwined.

Familiar presence felt not seen...
The one who makes her feel eighteen...
One who finds her when she's sleeping...
To take her soul into his keeping.

Spirit lover, her beloved...
The one who comes from in-between.
Caressing her, he's all to real...
Here in this land of tranquil dreams.

She awakens, can this be real...
Her lover's form at last revealed...
He takes her in his arms again...
Gives her passion....
.........takes her pain.


Together forever in this magic land...
Embracing eternity, hand in hand.


© July, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved



For Tashina in celebration of her heritage and her spirit....and in hopes she will return to this place in the sun!


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darkangel_blackwings
Jul 23, 2008, 03:13 AM


darkangel_blackwings
Jul 21, 2008, 10:42 AM

HOPE YOU HAVE A GOOD MONDAY!!!



DaveDoom51
Jul 20, 2008, 06:37 PM

I would like to read your book!

DaveDoom51
Jul 20, 2008, 05:06 AM

Well this one is really out there....even for me! I am sorry it is so damn long...it just refused to be pared down, and what was I to do? It made me wonder what was truly more evil....a daemon going about the business for which it is fated....or....mankind's evil nature! In any event, I hope you enjoy it and I look forward to yer comments good or bad ......decide fer yourself, with my dark blessings.






ABOMINATION


She saunters down the sidewalk...
Seeking stares and hungry glances...
From scalawags and vagabonds...
Eyes promising forbidden chances.

Glitzy dress cut up to there...
Panties tucked inside her purse...
Wicked smile upon her face...
Her thoughts deliciously perverse.

Satan's mistress, slowly walking...
Ferel eyes notice everything...
Searching for a willing convert...
A lover who can make her sing.

A man with liquor in his veins...
One whose soul remains un-stained...
A soul somehow that's still un-claimed...
That she might taste, what his soul contains.

Suddenly her footsteps falter...
She feels a flush rise in her cheeks...
Forgotten passion rages through her...
She's found the very thing she seeks.

Just ahead a man is walking...
His back is all that she can see...
Never has a mortal man...
Made her burn, with such ecstasy.

Erotic images fill her mind...
Dew gathers on her nether lips...
Only thoughts that she might lose him...
Allow such dreams to be eclipsed.

She notices then, he must have turned...
While thoughts of carnal acts still churned...
Within her mind, will she ever learn...
Her fulfillment, must first be earned.

How could he vanish so completely...
Lose himself within this crowd...
Such actions vex this sultry daemon...
They simply cannot be allowed.

To her surprise she feels the heat...
This mortal who's eluding her...
As he approaches from behind...
Did she allow this to occur?

She gasps to feel his arms around her...
Strong arms propel her through a door...
And there he has her from behind...
Upon some merchant's unclean floor.

She feels his seed erupt inside...
Feels somehow she's been denied...
It's probabally only wounded pride...
She sets such ugly thoughts aside.

After all her clear intention...
Had been to find one such as he...
To do precisely what they've done...
Though, not among foul floor debris.

She feels him stirring deep within her...
Is it his wish to come again?
His first words, whispered in her ear...
"I promise you exquisite pain."

"You see, the seed I have emplanted"...
"Within your heartless womb this day"...
"I paid to have my seed enchanted"...
"It will eat your very flesh away!"

"Remember as you slowly die"...
"As you curse, and as you cry"...
"My anger will not be denied"...
"Because of you, my brother died!"


© July, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved




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DaveDoom51
Jul 19, 2008, 01:06 PM

It is always such a pleasure to feel your presence on my page !! *hugs* You are vurry sweet!

DaveDoom51
Jul 19, 2008, 01:05 PM

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Sorry I haven't been around sooner....I have been dizzy for awhile now !! *sigh* Enjoy yer weekend!!

darkangel_blackwings
Jul 19, 2008, 10:41 AM


darkangel_blackwings
Jul 18, 2008, 09:57 AM


darkangel_blackwings
Jul 17, 2008, 11:06 AM


Amon
Jul 17, 2008, 10:20 AM


Amon
Jul 16, 2008, 01:07 PM


Hello Princess ...have a kick ass day

darkangel_blackwings
Jul 16, 2008, 10:17 AM

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darkangel_blackwings
Jul 15, 2008, 09:28 AM

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