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DaveDoom51
Sep 3, 2008, 01:31 AM

Sometimes I wonder how many times
destiny can be changed by the intervention
af a kind and knowing soul!

This tells us of such a time, I hope you enjoy!


Visions


Baby swaddled in soft doe-skin...
Begins this seasons' cycle again.
Wise grandmother, a woman of knowlege...
Time holds no power she doesnt acknowlege.

Fire eats birch-bark, glowing yellow...
Feeds on oak-wood, strong and mellow.
Her old eyes water with the knowing...
Of what time brings....
To this little one's growing.

From wrinkled gourds tied at her side...
She pours rare powder contained inside...
Rock circle endures, the smoke proclaims...
Powerful incantations, inhibit time again.

Shadows caper, arcane majik writhes...
Wafting smoke where infant lies...
She purifies this little one...
Protects her from the nameless one.

Star-souls strewn 'cross midnight skyes...
Watch ancient rites performed this night...
Watch as time, stops owls...mid-flight...
Watch grandmother, as she cries...
Tonight

Coyote screams his sad lament...
While others rest, their passions spent...
This woman knows what the old words meant...
Seeking balance to....
Life's cruel torment.

Infant soul, her time short on earth...
Some future time...will grant re-birth.


© August, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved



In celebration of my dear JaNea's impending "re-birth".


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darkangel_blackwings
Sep 2, 2008, 01:04 PM


already
Sep 2, 2008, 02:44 AM

The Golden Flute

Beyond my reach I know.
In me the storm-tossed weeping night
Finds room to rage and flow.

I cry aloud, but all in vain;
I helpless, the earth unkind
What soul of might can share my pain?
Death-dart alone I find.

A raft am I on the sea of Time,
My oars are washed away.
How can I hope to reach the clime
Of God's eternal Day?

But hark! I hear Thy golden Flute,
Its notes bring the Summit down.
Now safe am I, O Absolute!
Gone death, gone night's stark frown!
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darkangel_blackwings
Aug 30, 2008, 09:17 PM


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Aug 21, 2008, 09:07 PM




DaveDoom51
Aug 21, 2008, 11:59 AM

hehehe I saw this and thot I might pass it along....aint it just the
way it goes sometimes??? heheheh I hope you enjoy it !!!


darkangel_blackwings
Aug 20, 2008, 08:27 PM


darkangel_blackwings
Aug 19, 2008, 07:45 PM


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Aug 18, 2008, 07:25 PM


darkangel_blackwings
Aug 16, 2008, 08:49 PM



DROPPIN BY TO SAY HI!!!

DaveDoom51
Aug 16, 2008, 04:58 AM

Well here is the latest. It is a bit of a departure for me...
playing with the metre, but I hope you enjoy it.
I would enjoy hearing your reaction to this one....Thanks !





Dreams From The Lake

Depth-less waters of the lake surrender...
Gifts to enhance the female gender.
Here crystal dreams and passion's pleasure...
Reward the worthy...with aether's treasure.

Vivid dreams and passion's scenes...
Reflected in the waters....
Such power seeks sweet harmony...
Gifts for her blessed daughters.

Goddess rules here, undisputed...
Her perfect heart is so well suited...
To guide young souls, not yet polluted...
Ensuring they are not deluded.

Innocent bathing, unashamed...
But, evil greedy eyes observe.
A moments fantasy to be claimed...
Eyes drinking in her every curve.

From his concealment in the trees...
This interloper barely breathes...
He watches as she strides ashore...
Infernal thoughts demanding more.

As goddess steps upon the sand...
Her silken skin so soft and tanned...
Her watcher doesn't understand...
The retribution she has planned.

A secret smile plays 'pon her face...
As she stretches in the sun.
When will such spoilers learn their place...
This one's lesson just begun.

Trespasser's mind at last made up...
This stunning beauty he will take.
Another soul to fill his cup...
Revenge upon this hateful lake.

Magically he is astride her...
But before he thrusts inside her...
He somehow finds he's bound beside her...
Aware now...that he's been denied her.

Above him stands a snarling creature...
An apparition from nightmare dreams.
Soft tranquil silence of the lake...
Bears witness to his desperate screams.

Outraged daughter of the lake...
Watches coldly as he squirms...
Pondering what else she should take...
Before she leaves him for the worms.

She reaches out with cruel intent...
Removing that, which now seems spent...
That part he used without consent...
Her climax reached, watching his torment.

Sacred peace is at last restored...
His awful death...is his just reward!


© August, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved



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darkangel_blackwings
Aug 15, 2008, 08:17 PM



I HOPE YOUR WEEK WAS AN AWESOME ONE!!!!

DaveDoom51
Aug 14, 2008, 01:32 AM

Well....I just can't seem to finish my latest.......and, since it has been so long
since I have stopped by.....Here is something by Leslie Cottle, that I really en-
joy, and I hope you do as well










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