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DaveDoom51
May 31, 2008, 04:58 AM

Have ya ever wondered what that Catholic Nun who works as a nurse in the hospital did for entertainment????
Well here is one I dredged out of the depths of my imagination...heheheh....I hope you enjoy the latest!!



Black Onyx


A time to hear and to obey...
Commanding beauty she doth convey...
Angel of mercy so dark and vicious---
Power abused...but the blood's delicious.

Approaching the bed that just arrived..
She feels a stirring from deep inside.
His wide eyes beg her for escape...
From his pain...infernal plans taking shape.

An injection to increase his hurting---
She licks his skin before inserting...
A monstrous needle in his vein---
Time for her evil games again.

Hell's half-sister of creation shines...
Through rough vessels, at such times.
Agony birthed so hot with-in him,
No succor by this harlot...given.

Chanting and awful acts conspire....
To bring about what she desires.
Death and cold destruction reign...
Soon only death's release remains.

Laying naked upon the bed beside him...
Her body alive, with wild...anticipation.
Foul ritual now demands completion...
A bath for her, in death's secretions.

Adding spice to her deprivation...
His agony fueling her desperation...
She reaches blessed culmination...
Better than pious masturbation.

Groaning marks her soul's release...
Imagined outrage of parish preists...
Should they learn of secret rites..
Performed by her on duty nights!

Adjusting garments, tying laces...
Bathing him to remove all traces...
Of her night's perverse attraction...
Removing signs of her satisfaction.

Soon...another she shall use...
Another corpse she can abuse.


© May, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved



Lovingly dedicated to Dawn and Tashina....my two true "Angels of Mercy"...Thank You !! ~DaveDoom51


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darkangel_blackwings
May 28, 2008, 09:19 AM

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DaveDoom51
May 27, 2008, 02:46 PM

Well, thankyou for putting up with my lack of communication......I think things have settled down a bit now so I hope to be here more

In any event, here is one from my archives that I don't think you have seen !! (I have ignored my writing just recently as well !)





Ingenue

Shadow writhing in the mirror, intense eyes staring...
Mirror in shards, fractured faces glaring...
Imagination soaring, fragile reality in tatters...
Things gone horribly wrong, escape is all that now matters.

Arcane gestures performed, evil unknowingly seeded...
Franticly seeking asylum, sanctuary desperately needed.
Awful spawn of her conjuring, suddenly sitting beside her...
She repeatedly screams, soul ripped out from inside her.

Sudden quiet descends, marred only by panting...
Hideous creature she birthed, quietly chanting...
Forbidden, almost forgotten verses...
Bathing in foul birthblood...capering, reciting Assyrian curses.

Fell shadow now here, as young ingenue commanded...
Her naive soul forfeit, as custom demanded...
Evil grin spreading, across mal-formed features...
Squirming soul eagerly devoured, the way of such creatures.

Writhing and dancing this foul imp of destruction---
Now prostrate in obescience, he receives his instruction...
Gleeful imaginings, soon to be dreadfully clear---
Fell imp thirsting for this mortal, ambrosial fear.

Clad now in false beauty, traveling openly among us---
Foul urges hidden for now, his mission to urge us...
To act with abandon, pursue beastial passion---
Demean us, leave us empty of human compassion.

Cycle endlessly repeated...why won't we learn...
Mankind hopelessly diseased...destined to burn.



©July, 2007 ~davedoom51 all rights reserved




darkangel_blackwings
May 27, 2008, 09:29 AM

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May 19, 2008, 12:49 AM


unique
May 18, 2008, 07:45 AM

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DaveDoom51
May 17, 2008, 03:52 PM

Here is the latest.....It is for Lynn, and if you know her....you will know it fits! I hope you enjoy
Enjoy your weekend!





Evil Lynn

Passing naked in the twilight...
Path revealed by gentle soul-light.
Warm easy breeze caresses her...
She feels insistant magic stir.
~~~
In this garden of rembrance...
Ancient images proclaim...
Ages will not dim such balance...
Arcane wisdom will remain.


Lynn journeys here, not for pleasure...
Not for gold, nor worldy treasures...
Instead she's questing for revenge...
Foul actions that she would avenge.
~~~
On the morrow her soul's sister...
Meets her death beneath the blade.
Due to some malicious whispers...
By shallow friends she was betrayed.


Lynn wonders as she ventures further...
What this feeling is inside her...
As if her soul is being branded...
As if somehow it is commanded...
To writhe within her very center...
Wrench itself out of her keeping.
Tomorrow she will count the cost...
Time enough then for her weeping.


Laughter greets her late arrival...
Faerie ring assures survival...
Awful vengance worth the price...
She strikes Mother's brass-bell thrice.
~~~
Lynn shrieks to see her dark intending...
Taking form as it descends.
Shape that alters destiny...
The shape required to save her friend.


At last the reckoning time arrives...
Time for this sending to alter lives.
Dark sending anxious to receive...
The final shaping before it leaves.
~~~
Dancing with the crystal flow,
Guided by ancient mother's hands...
Sharpening intending's purpose,
She learns the price success demands.

~~~

In a land not split asunder...
As in times when they were younger.
Lynn and her lover soar forever...
Worth the price of her endeavor!


© May, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved


For Lynn and Lilli


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already
May 17, 2008, 01:54 AM

Silent Tears,, good title,, hope to find good words to fit..

unique
May 15, 2008, 07:40 PM


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unique
May 14, 2008, 08:49 AM

hope all is well with ya. chat with ya soon
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unique
May 13, 2008, 09:03 PM

i sure will mine is www.myspace.com/mrtjbm

unique
May 13, 2008, 06:58 AM

thanks for that. i put that on myspace
have a blessed day my sister
unique

DaveDoom51
May 11, 2008, 07:54 AM

Heheheheheheeee....I do wish all the Mothers on Deep Realms a very happy "Mother's Day" !!! I know even they will admit that there is an occasional throw-back...That female who is more daemon than woman......so I just HAD to send this older poem to all my friends today! Thank you for your kind indulgence!



Betrothal

Dread daughter of chaos, no physical flaws---
Appearing deceptively docile, sharpening ebony claws.
Luxurious preparation, bathing in young-maidens' blood---
Stretching supernatural sinew, rejoicing in the flood...
Of despicable emotions, accompanying odors as well---
Infernal mission paramount, engraved invitation to hell.
Deceiving humanity, true image never displayed---
Carefully choosing her raiment, for tonight's masquerade.

Plans nearing fruition, letting her mind rush ahead---
Ceremony this evening, celebrating the soon-to-be dead.
Monstrous teeth peeking, through succulent lips---
Debauched images overwhelm her, as her disguise briefly slips.
Deep carnal moaning, down low in her throat---
This corpse-bride is anxious, chance of escape is remote.
Foolish priest murmurs, beloved standing beside her---
Later stealing his soul, as he thrusts desperately inside her.

Abandoning her musings, regaining total composure---
Musn't allow her excitement, to result in exposure.
Impatiently waiting, for her bride's entourage---
Planning to wear her groom's heart, as a bloody corsage.

© February, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved




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DaveDoom51
May 9, 2008, 08:11 AM

Please forgive my absence from your comments recently ! I was giving birth to this foul child of a poem....I hope you enjoy it!!!!


Betrayal


So many nights we've lain together,
Thinking we were friends forever...
Now such thoughts are in the past...
I guess nothing good is meant to last.

In your arrogance you believe,
Implausable logic which you conceive...
To justify your manipulation,
Demanding another's...capitulation.

The string of souls you leave behind,
The one's you use...ones you think are blind...
Were only dazzled by your double-talk,
They simply lacked the will to walk..........

Away.

Is that disdain that you are feeling,
For those souls from whom you're stealing?
Are you so busy running away,
Do your indiscretions forbid your stay?

Perhaps your anger is reserved,
For those who treat you as you deserve?
Remeber you reap that which you sow,
You shouldn't trifle with those who know.......

You.

A word of caution may be in order,
Don't drag me into your own disorder...
For you are small with-in your rage,
Avoid my teeth...turn the fucking page!


© May, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved



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