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DaveDoom51
Jun 23, 2007, 10:04 PM

A word of warning to men everywhere who would presume to trifle with the Ladies.




Annabelle


She strolls along, her stealth uncanny...eyes expressing her disbelief .
Deaths sweet release, the prize she seeks ....her ultimate relief.
Foul odor accompanies sweet anabelle..sensed, not quite discerned.
Steady on, her mission paramount....attracting notice, unconcerned.

Life's lustre lost this fateful day...betrayors' paid the price...
Damage done her soul this day...just payment exacted, thrice.
Wretched pair offended her...continued existance, foul insult...
Indescretion not allowed, swift awful vengence...inevitable result.

The hearts she carries in her hands, seem yet to flutter, still...
Is better to have loved and lost, what silly nonsense...utter swill.
Anticipation, heartbeat rapid...cruel vengence still incomplete...
Tonight's cold moon holds promise...carnal yearning will retreat.

Honeysuckle upon the breeze...mother moon ascends the sky...
Course of action plain enough, Annabelle begins to cry.
Inserting steel through protesting flesh...involuntary groan....
Three hearts lay upon the alter-stone...the beating one, her own.




©June, 2007 ~davedoom51

I wonder if you would be kind enough to give an opinion???






DaveDoom51
Jun 22, 2007, 08:52 AM

IT IS ONLY POLITE TO VISIT YOUR FRIENDS AND POST
TO LET THEM KNOW YOU STILL WANT TO BE FRIENDS !!
ARE YOU STILL ALIVE AND KICKING ?? LOL






Sonofbeast
Jun 20, 2007, 06:57 AM

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Jun 19, 2007, 05:39 PM

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DaveDoom51
Jun 17, 2007, 05:12 PM

I am shamelessy seeking opinions of this poem! Feel like letting me know what you think of it? Thank you!!



Mhorashty


Evil bubble of perception...stinking of carrion., prurient interests...seeking favorable reception...
Gentle souls as they flower, succulent dining results...causing the stalwart to falter, spitting cruel insults.
Road to destruction, craving adulation.... capering, fawning...offering obscene copulation...
As incentive, demanding mass destruction...gentle souls no more...rancid decay...inviting corruption.

Lovers of carrion, riding ruby eyed vultures...gleefully snickering...decimating peaceful, pastoral cultures...
Disdaining sword and more honorable weapons...cruel soul eaters...shapeshifters...preferring deception.
Carnal lures their armament, viscious desires...whispered in countless ears, infernal plan requires...
Willing perversion of other's morality...co-operation....eager inductees are found, across every nation.

Oh soulless Mhorashty, freely walking amongst us---offered comfortable flesh lodging---festering places inside us...
What gift was it, you offered during carnal embraces...evil truth to be found...in ancient graveyards...and other foul places.
Brief fleeting pleasures you offered, high prices demanded---parasitical lust consummated, rampant chaos demanded...
As flies among entrails, celebrating awful deception...no shortage of souls, offer adoring reception.

Beautiful Mhorashty, ancient tellers of lies...
Herald anticipated return, of the Lord of Flies.



©June, 2007 ~davedoom51




They roam the world of the mortals for unknown reasons but seem to be drawn to death like fleas to a dead corpse. They're said to wander freely between our world and the Netherworlds but more is not known. In other contexts they're also seen in connection with Etherus as creatures of lust and the sins of love although their alignment to death and destruction seems to be pre-dominant.




Sonofbeast
Jun 12, 2007, 12:18 AM

Greetings, my new friend!
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DaveDoom51
Jun 11, 2007, 07:12 AM



One being's art is sometimes another's rubbish! Please feel free to delete this poem if you find it objectionable!!!


A Moment.


Sweet sheen of perspiration gleaming, heart pounding...blood steaming...
Wanton bodies scheming...delayed release...walls resound wanton screaming.
Primal undulations weaving...delightful sensations cleaving.....sanity slowly leaving.
Rapid breathing betrays the truth...Lovely goddess now believing.

Gently, stroking lightly, parting thighs.....pouting lips decry----
The coming pain of entry... soul scream...echoing love's own sweet sigh.
Building....urgently awaiting release...this flood tide thrusts...
Against yeilding sinew...his lovely smile renews her trust.

Sated, bodies glowing as the sun.....
Two trembling bodies now made one.



©June, 2007 ~davedoom51

I humbly dedicate this poem to my friends at Deep Realms.
Especially for the two of you who inspired this prose.
You know who you are!




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Jun 10, 2007, 10:30 PM

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DaveDoom51
Jun 9, 2007, 07:45 PM




Dark Lady


She roams--seeking evil bits and pieces---plucking ruined edenfruit,.coveting cheap carnal releases...
Gown never sullied,depthless soul perverted---desiring adulation from the easily converted.
Roaming the cellars and dark soul places---found under stairways, behind grotesque faces...
Lusting, thrusting, never trusting, her quest appears endless, plans constantly adjusting.

Sweet gossamer pattern, Dark Lady has woven---spider's kiss, impatiently awaiting her chosen...
Traps laid, plans made, worlds for the taking---new world order---mammon's delusion in the making.
Anxious now, foul fluids racing---ancient brotherhood's goal in sight---Lady weary of chasing...
Prophecy's promise, once ethereal---now horribly incarnate---blood and innocence the chosen material.

Rebirth unnoted, sweating bodies endeavor---to obtain promised rewards, now denied them forever...
Gleefully rejoicing, Lady's elation enhanced---by the antics of misguided souls she entranced.
Too late for repentance, infernal obesience required---by this dark queen of chaos, total corruption desired...
Her scheming dececeptions, false lingering kisses as well---plans come to fruition---humanity's selfish folly resulting in hell.

One further depridation is all she requires...
Succulent man-flesh to satisfy her culinary desires.




©2007 ~davedoom51



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DaveDoom51
Jun 9, 2007, 10:11 AM




DaveDoom51
Jun 8, 2007, 07:13 AM

Thanks for the add!!!!

I don't think you have seen this one, Yet-----Opinion???



Hunger

Desire surges, inflamed blood boiling---Adramelech's awful serpent uncoiling...
Throw off the shroud, escape confinement---desire rejects reason's cruel refinement...
Images perceived, foul actions concieved---pressure building, satisfy this unholy need...
From ancient legend, unappended---dreadful repetition, another life ended.

Unwary citizens intent, embroiled---in life's pursuit, mortality destined to be soiled....
A chance encounter, vicious carnage enacted---mortal death the price exacted....
Satisfaction achieved, pathetic husk discarded---breif death memories uselessly imparted...
To one to whom such pitiful sharing---tis but a footnote, incapable of caring.

Dark ancient predator,freely ranging---at large among us, filthy desire never changing...
Hunger rampant, fell nature shamelessly displayed---man's sacrifice leaves lesser gods dismayed...
Myth and darkness veil his movement---religion and doctrine boast meager improvement...
Assyrian lunacy, imprudent preistly creation---assuming form in latter days, embraced by every nation.

Succor forever denied...
Only disdain for those who died!




©2007 ~davedoom51



"Hunger" is a poem I wrote awhile back. Adramelech is an asyrian diety sometimes referred to as Baal Adramelech by the ancient asyrian priests. In any event blood sacrifice of children was demanded by Adramelech (some historians believe vampirism was acknowledged during this period).

This poem simply describes the rebirth of this ancient evil into the modern world and the acceptance by mankind of the rebirth "assuming form in latter days, embraced by every nation."

In the last paragraph the symbolism is supposed to reflect mankind's willingness to sacrifice children willingly for a questionable cause....such as war. Hope that makes the intent clearer for you??!!
I portray the demon demi-god Adramelech as a vampire unfeelingly feeding and casting aside his prey not even remembering them "Satisfaction achieved, pathetic husk discarded---brief death memories uselessly imparted...
To one to whom such pitiful sharing---tis but a footnote, incapable of caring. To symbolize the acceptance of evil by mankind with no eye towards consequence. Finally in this vein, the last 2 lines simply show how humanity disdains the sacrifice of others ; "Succor forever denied...
Only disdain for those who died!"




Calmez
Jun 8, 2007, 03:06 AM

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Jun 7, 2007, 07:01 PM

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Jun 6, 2007, 07:34 PM

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Jun 3, 2007, 11:22 PM

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