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Wonderfully_Evil
May 23, 2007, 07:32 AM

it would be for me

Wonderfully_Evil
May 22, 2007, 04:18 AM

my dreams have been about butterflies and rainbows.. with the occasional unicorn.. I wonder if that means Im thinking about you?

TheMorbidIncarnation
May 21, 2007, 05:38 PM

Hehe, thanks man. Hey, you should spice up your page abit, to better reflect your personal image.

DaveDoom51
May 21, 2007, 03:11 PM

Please let me know if you would like to not be bothered by these poems !
I will strive to not inflict them further! lol

Here is one a little different.....more subtle! Try it???

Krystal Kaverns

Buried in antiquity, swaddled deep in earths embrace...
Few have been there---beauty and fell sacrifice demanded in this place.
Dwelling near to mother's heart, these awesome halls resound...
Disguised in desperate silence, infernal torture---dark memories still abound.

Awful beauty exacts her tribute, countless souls consumed...
Seeking out her beauty, infrequent travelers, unwitting guests---eternally entombed
Behold her splendor at your peril---grave ransom to be paid...
Hasty judgements, human failings--- desperate apetite displayed.

Be wary intrepid adventurer, monstrous demi-gods still dwell...
Deep in the earth by mother's heart---krystal kaverns are unwell.
Perverted beauty gnashing teeth, twisted intelligence exists there...
The Krystal halls of ages past, yearn for mortal soul's sweet nectar.


Dragonbayne
May 21, 2007, 06:52 AM

I cannot believe that no one has ever ranked you, so I just gave you the first ranking a perfect 10

Dragonbayne
May 21, 2007, 06:51 AM

I miss you more

Wonderfully_Evil
May 21, 2007, 01:58 AM

that means so much coming from you, thank you

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donita
May 21, 2007, 01:20 AM

hello toxic, nice to finally meet you! i'm just writing a silly paper for school. i know exactly where lakewood is... i live in victorville. nice weather we've been having huh? how have you been?

witchcunt
May 20, 2007, 04:02 PM

Hey Toxic, fancy a smite?

Dragonbayne
May 20, 2007, 03:14 PM

Hey Toxic
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donita
May 20, 2007, 06:05 AM



just dropping by to say hi... finally.. thanks for adding me like a week ago!

TheMorbidIncarnation
May 20, 2007, 01:50 AM

Psst. I made my page and added pic of gf, but seeing larger pics of your gf, I retract what I said, lol. See ya on SS.

Wonderfully_Evil
May 19, 2007, 11:22 PM

ha, I only asked because I have a thing for dickheads.. and you are definetly a dickhead.

DaveDoom51
May 19, 2007, 04:36 PM

I sincerely appreciate your comments regarding my poetry!! In answer to your question.....I am hoping to be published by January! My fingers are crossed!!

DaveDoom51
May 19, 2007, 08:52 AM

For Those of you who have asked about more
(And since I am a Shameless Slut, promoting my work)
Here is something you might enjoy!


Hunger



Desire surges, inflamed blood boiling---Adramelech's awful serpent uncoiling...
Throw off the shroud, escape confinement---desire rejects reason's cruel refinement...
Images perceived, foul actions concieved---pressure building, satisfy this unholy need...
From ancient legend, unappended---dreadful repetition, another life ended.

Unwary citizens intent, embroiled---in life's pursuit, mortality destined to be soiled....
A chance encounter, vicious carnage enacted---mortal death the price exacted....
Satisfaction achieved, pathetic husk discarded---breif death memories uselessly imparted...
To one to whom such pitiful sharing---tis but a footnote, incapable of caring.

Dark ancient predator,freely ranging---at large among us, filthy desire never changing...
Hunger rampant, fell nature shamelessly displayed---man's sacrifice leaves lesser gods dismayed...
Myth and darkness veil his movement---religion and doctrine boast meager improvement...
Assyrian lunacy, imprudent preistly creation---assuming form in latter days, embraced by every nation.

Succor forever denied...
Only disdain for those who died!








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