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DaveDoom51
May 21, 2007, 03:14 PM

Please let me know if you would like to not be bothered by these poems !
I will strive to not inflict them further! lol

Here is one a little different.....more subtle! Try it???

Krystal Kaverns

Buried in antiquity, swaddled deep in earths embrace...
Few have been there---beauty and fell sacrifice demanded in this place.
Dwelling near to mother's heart, these awesome halls resound...
Disguised in desperate silence, infernal torture---dark memories still abound.

Awful beauty exacts her tribute, countless souls consumed...
Seeking out her beauty, infrequent travelers, unwitting guests---eternally entombed
Behold her splendor at your peril---grave ransom to be paid...
Hasty judgements, human failings--- desperate apetite displayed.

Be wary intrepid adventurer, monstrous demi-gods still dwell...
Deep in the earth by mother's heart---krystal kaverns are unwell.
Perverted beauty gnashing teeth, twisted intelligence exists there...
The Krystal halls of ages past, yearn for mortal soul's sweet nectar.


fireblyss
May 19, 2007, 10:55 PM

Why thank you, my lovely! This is exactly my cup of tea...

DaveDoom51
May 19, 2007, 04:37 PM

*Bows* Thank you for your kind words, Siblings!

DaveDoom51
May 19, 2007, 08:54 AM

For Those of you who have asked about more
(And since I am a Shameless Slut, promoting my work)
Here is something you might enjoy!


Hunger



Desire surges, inflamed blood boiling---Adramelech's awful serpent uncoiling...
Throw off the shroud, escape confinement---desire rejects reason's cruel refinement...
Images perceived, foul actions concieved---pressure building, satisfy this unholy need...
From ancient legend, unappended---dreadful repetition, another life ended.

Unwary citizens intent, embroiled---in life's pursuit, mortality destined to be soiled....
A chance encounter, vicious carnage enacted---mortal death the price exacted....
Satisfaction achieved, pathetic husk discarded---breif death memories uselessly imparted...
To one to whom such pitiful sharing---tis but a footnote, incapable of caring.

Dark ancient predator,freely ranging---at large among us, filthy desire never changing...
Hunger rampant, fell nature shamelessly displayed---man's sacrifice leaves lesser gods dismayed...
Myth and darkness veil his movement---religion and doctrine boast meager improvement...
Assyrian lunacy, imprudent preistly creation---assuming form in latter days, embraced by every nation.

Succor forever denied...
Only disdain for those who died!








©2007 ~davedoom51

DaveDoom51
May 18, 2007, 04:43 AM

Thanks for the Add--This an older poem of mine that I enjoy. Please consider it, and give your opinion.....good or bad?

Apocolypse

thunder echoes,storm clouds gather...
lightning rapes protesting sky....
heaven weeps for lost chances, new beginnings, hopes unrealized
while in the abyss new order writhes...

change is in the air, sensed not seen....
promises made, promises kept, freedom is the imagery
yearning to strut...
timeless chains are now struck, chaos in the making
souls of man ripe for the taking....

free at last from heavens cruel embrace
chaos walks amongst us, mad dogs proclaim her return....
eyes hungry; claws unsheathed
birthed again from unclean earth...
she comes; all hail the Daemon Bytch...

out of the pit, birthblood steaming...
stinking of sweat, changling tissue straining, destiny at hand,
sweet discord...
shreiking earth rejects her, recoiling from foretellings voice
mad dogs echo Daemons choice...

embracing mankind, disquises fading, death of hope commanded...
revealed at last in all her splendour lifeblood her macabre desire
innocence remanded...
New order lusting for fulfillment, appetite not appeased
dried husks of souls discarded, breeding Daemons fell disease...

Awake again, fortellings voice...
true darkness reigns, the death of choice


©2006-2007 ~davedoom51



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May 16, 2007, 10:32 AM

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May 9, 2007, 10:45 AM

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hollowed-be-thy-name
May 9, 2007, 08:21 AM

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kinky_kitten666
May 8, 2007, 05:31 PM

thx 4 the add

XBloodyKissesX9
May 4, 2007, 10:59 PM

hey, thanx for the add!

dawn
May 1, 2007, 04:31 PM

Hi Twisted!

I like your background. Very haunting









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