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gothsrule666
Aug 12, 2007, 09:21 AM

hiiiiiiiiiii.....how have you been?

Dragonbayne
Aug 11, 2007, 03:44 PM

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Aug 9, 2007, 06:10 PM







DALTRAV
Aug 8, 2007, 11:03 AM

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DaveDoom51
Aug 5, 2007, 07:45 PM










Neophyte

Incautious neophyte, wandering aimlessly---exploring borders, questing shamelessly...
For secrets hidden, from mortal awareness---her innocence making her, unforgivably careless.
Stumbling upon sour earth---foul pregnant entity giving birth...
To one whose awful name inspires---malignant dreams, demented mortal desires.

Birth signifying, death of dreams---beauty forever lost, birth-mother screams...
Writhing and moaning, changeling clawing inside her...birthblood jetting, pooling beside her.
Into our plane, nightmare born again---neophyte aghast, driven nearly insane.
Grotesque incarnation, seems to be grinning---gazing coldly at mother, dreaming of sinning.

Backing away, neophyte desperately striving---for surcease, from the image of changeling arriving.
Frantic noises,unkowingly spoken---bowels voiding in horror, darkest dread still unspoken.
Birth-mother grunts, changeling's foul actions resuming---suckling mother's teat, her life-force consuming.
Sated for now, changling casually disdains---this dried husk once his mother, all that remains.

Inching carefully away, elders must be advised---foul abomination lives, birthed before her eyes.
This thought paramount, neophyte swiftly fleeing---away from this abattoir, her wide eyes unseeing.
Distance desired, from this unthinkable depredation---away from cruel changling, seeking salvation.
Stinking breath on her neck, suddenly discerned---claws severing flesh, somehow unconcerned...
Curiously calm, she finds herself on the ground---desperate screams go unheeded, for there's no one around.

Changling capers in glee, such despicable carnage arouses...
Thoughts of succulent mortals, asleep in their houses.




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Dragonbayne
Aug 4, 2007, 07:32 PM

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Hope your vacation is going well.

Gypsy
Aug 3, 2007, 02:05 PM

I'm shure that you know this situation.. hahahahhaa (in the Tardis...)
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DaveDoom51
Aug 2, 2007, 07:31 PM





Reward


Lonliness constant, no time for deep relations---working majiks, performing arcane ritual incantations.
Occasional would-be visitors, suddenly reluctant---grotesque soul that beauty hides, superstitious fears ascendant.
Young suffering soul, timidly approaches---aware of foul nature, upon which she encroaches..
Seeking answers and awful retribution---coming here in torment, desiring a dark infernal solution.

Beauty's mask showing compassion, perfectly arranged---examining her visitor, voracious eyes remain unchanged.
Such simple folk, girls in rough dresses---she muses, while imagining future cruel excesses.
Speak freely child, for your torment is clear---someone abusing you...speak...you've nothing to fear.
Many have visited me here, seeking compassion---you have my attention, I can discern your passion.

Skin splitting, awful scabrous boils erupting---visitor stinking of death, and resultant vile corruption...
Siezes the throat, of this simpering conniving creature---feeding upon innocence, in the guise of their teacher.
Recall as you die, vicious majikal pretender---one resembling me seeking help, young soul so poinantly tender...
Was my sister that day, you so cruelly devastated---witness now the horror, that is me aggravated.

Retribution comes---in a myriad, of clever guises...
Beware those souls capable, of convincing disguises.




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Anarchy4All
Jul 31, 2007, 05:43 PM

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DaveDoom51
Jul 31, 2007, 03:38 PM




Night Wanderer

Night wanderer, soul predator from forgotten ages...drinking deeply from precious arteries, her mind disengages.
Painful memories forgotten, burning desire to be free...mortal death is acceptable, lost love memories she flees.
Blood loss enhances, foul memory's chances...like boils that she lances...transformation beginning...her immortal heart dances.
Greedily sucking, lifeblood from her soul---she feeds from his wrist, her thoughts darker than coal.

A visit she plans, lost love will regret---trifling with hearts, a visit he won't soon forget.
New strength deep inside her, dawning like fire---vitality delights her, revenge her greatest desire.
Birthing schemes, sensual blood-drenched dreams---fill her mind as she screams...outrages...unforgotten it seems.
Disengaging herself, from this dark benefactor---stretching changeling tendons, new abilities to master.

Time passes as she practices, learning infernal secret seductions---perfecting her art, ignoring resultant population reductions.
Such wonderful secrets, learned from men she embraces---sweet death memories imparted, leaving indelible traces...
At last she feels ready, magnificant power is steady---her exuberance heady...awful retribution imagined...countless times already.
Traveling on nightwings, she finally arrives---the place her lover and she, once lived their lives.

Stealthily entering his quarters...this can't be...she finds herself weeping...
Lost love taken by cholera...in his coffin already....eternally sleeping.





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DALTRAV
Jul 30, 2007, 02:55 PM

Custom Comments and More @ † Dark Angel Designz † seeing you drop by brightens up the day.always good to see you.

DaveDoom51
Jul 29, 2007, 10:01 AM

A tongue in cheek look at an old myth lol



THIS POEM LOVINGLY DEDICATED TO PANDORA, FOR THE TRUE CARING SHE SHOWS TO ALL

Pandora


Sweet gentle soul, curiosity apalling---greedy eyes gleaming, dark sastifaction insistantly calling...
Restlessly pacing, distractions seeking---toying with her hair, voices in her head softly speaking...
Arranging her wardrobe, eyes irresistably drawn...object of desire, where has her good sense gone...
Shaking her head, instructions crystal clear---delicious knowledge could be hers, nothing to fear.

Am I not a goddess, entitled to know---wonderous secrets imagined, intoxicating exotic power to show...
At the next gathering of Olympian elite---jealous stares from contemporaries, petty social conquest complete.
Jupiter created her, he gave her the box---silly not to peek briefly inside, where are the locks...
Preventing immediate satisfaction, her soul is believing---one quick glimpse at, what her groom is receiving.

Epimetheus is no more deserving, no greater than she---damnable box and it's wonders, simply won't let her be.
A chance such as this, comes but once in ages---stomping petulantly around, internal debate continually rages.
Mind made up, greedy hands grasping---breathlessly opening the vessel, she finds herself gasping...
As out of this mysterious, god given device---comes forth greed, and hatefulness, other things not so nice.

Such a disappointment, no interesting power discovered...
Mankind's desperate suffering increases, never fully recovered.



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DALTRAV
Jul 27, 2007, 06:12 PM

Custom Comments and More @ † Dark Angel Designz † love having you drop by

DALTRAV
Jul 27, 2007, 06:11 PM

Custom Comments and More @ † Dark Angel Designz † love having you drop by

DaveDoom51
Jul 27, 2007, 06:02 AM

HERE IS A NEW ONE TO START YER WEEKEND WITH !!





Awareness

Ancient walls, patient witness to the fall---of men's desires, uncaring sentinels cast a pall...
Upon all who in their arrogance tread here---those adventurers willing to challenge the dead here.
Past home to gods and their grotesque vibrations---aged walls awakening, craving dark orgiastic celebrations...
As in those times so long ago, dark rituals observed---infernal soul awakening, impressions covetously preserved.

In centuries past, power carelessly weilded here---fell awarenes feeding, dining on mankind's fear.
Appetite for mortal suffering, unappeased---somber monument to avarice, hoplessly diseased.
Soulless blood-soaked structure, growing stronger---echoing cries of lost souls, no patience any longer...
Ancient walls scream out their terrible desire---lust for power, brings the foolish souls required.

Ahh you strutting heroes, doers of great deeds---violent death awaits you, but it fills the needs...
Of ancient existance, warped by selfish depredation---seeking sustenence, from your soul's reluctant donation.
Cunning glamours, this malignant awareness employs---offering nothing of substance, your death it enjoys.
Timeless edifice attracts seekers, vast beyond number---these walls offering only, tortured eternal slumber.

Beware you power seekers, with greed on your faces...
True evil often inhabits, the most unlikely of places.




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